feedback please on design 29718740 and 29718741 , thanks

Hi,
Provide feedback to this design #29721722.
Also if you want any changes then feel free to tell me.

#29721722
Thanks

Hello Rixy Toy, Great job with the renderings, we really like to those to envision how the logo could look like. I am just responding to provide you with the feedback you asked for. We think you took a direction with the logo that does not align with what we are looking for. The pistols in the center are great thinking outside the box but makes the corinthian helmet hard to recognize. The letters PA at the top further make it difficult to recognize the logo is a helment. Furthermore, we do not want to have any association with firearms, we are an ammunition-only company. I understand it is almost an insignificant difference but for legal purposes, it makes a difference. Lastly, the font used closely resembles a military font. We, the founders, are active-duty military members and veterans but we don't want this brand to be associated with the military. We are looking for something better than the military standards, something more elegant, and something more distinctive. We sincerely want to thank you for submitting the designs. We can see that you put in a good effort and gave it deep thought. Very respectfully

Hello Ramu6, Great job thinking differently, we really like to envision how a different logo could look like. I am just responding to provide you with the feedback you asked for. We think you took a direction with the logo that does not align with what we are looking for. It is very creative to have the logo in form of an ammunition but it is hard to recognize what it is. Look up the shape of a 5.56 NATO round, it should give you a better idea for next time. We sincerely want to thank you for submitting the designs. We can see that you put in a good effort and gave it deep thought. Very respectfully