Design id: 51224  feedback plz

Hi There.  Could I please get some feedback.  greatly appreciated.

Dear Jason,
Many thanks for your submission, sorry for the delay in giving feedback but it is Easter holidays and I was away from my computer.
I have edited my brief on April 3rd and if you read that you will note your submission held some things that I asked originally not to include in the design, namely sharp right angles.
If you wish to resubmit after re-reading the brief please do so.
Many thanks,
Arjava
Become Clear

Dear Jason,
Many thanks for your submission, sorry for the delay in giving feedback but it is Easter holidays and I was away from my computer.
I have edited my brief on April 3rd and if you read that you will note your submission held some things that I asked originally not to include in the design, namely sharp right angles.
If you wish to resubmit after re-reading the brief please do so.
Many thanks,
Arjava
Become Clear