Key design to drive out my tag lines

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Hi There,

I have worked on trying to put together a t-shirt design though have become stuck with a couple of things which I need help on, or simply just another design idea put together if something stands out. Open to anything really. The idea is to have my three key tag lines in this one design in which will break off into single designs at a later stage.
My brand name is “Eternity Apparel” – do not necessarily need this in the design anywhere – but might be good for you to know – have attached.
This design. (I have put together attached my initial idea – again can be changed to something better).

1. Want to incorporate my three key tag lines.

• Part of the minority
This needs to stay as is, due to being used in other places already - have attached the single file for this one to re-create - note the last "I" in minority is a red needle which represents "eye of a needle" unfortunately this in red does not print well so open to ideas.
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