Wellness centre needs a logo that encapsulates the journey of becoming your best self

C'est ce que OPTIMA recherchait dans leur logo design

I'm opening a wellness centre and I want a beautiful and eye-catching logo to represent the journey a person is taking to become the best version of themselves, the name of the centre will be “Optima” and I want the logo to show a Koi travelling down a stream (to the right), and emerging in the clouds as a dragon (I want it to be more like the dragon is made of clouds and it should be facing the right, add some blue highlights to accentuate the cloud shape, or black if it looks odd), With the the words "OPTIMA" placed seamlessly in the middle, I want the bottom part to show both sides of the stream with some fauna making it lively (maybe little trees and bushes sprinkled around, if you think it's ugly then leave it) , Ive attached images that you can reference for what I'm going for. The first image is my original concept but I was told it was undoable and wouldn't work as a logo (If you do this you're giving yourself a huge step up, if you can't make it work with the yin yang, just g… Voir plus