Please check my design, send feedback to see if im in the right track

Thank you for the invitation. I will submit some options soon.
Kindest Regards

I just submitted my first draft
Design #5253013.
Could you please review this design and let me know if it is the style you are after before I spend more time refining it.
Kindest Regards

hi sir
im submit my new design
im waiting for your feedback sir
tank sir