I would love to revise my design for you to more closely align with what you had in mind. I can see from the ratings that the font needs an update, but I was curious if you had any additional feedback that could help me take this to the next level. Please feel free to send me a message with any direction. Thank you!

hello,
I have submitted designs for your contest. I would like to make good answer for your brief that's why feedback would be appreciated.

All best,