Hi, this looks like a great project. I have in mind a few ideas, but wanted to know if you would be averse to seeing the words 'When' and 'Soon', on 2 lines, this would create more typographical possibilites.

hey ron - i would not be adverse to seeing the words "When" and "Soon" on 2 lines.  I think that could be a great idea.

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Hi,

Thanks for your submissions guys - I posted an update to the project today and I''m going to try and eliminate/provide feedback on logos today.

I've submitted 3 designs, I went for a more creative approach, I hope you like this creation and I am open to changes/suggestions. Thank you for your time.

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hi,

I have sent logo. Please give me Feedback....!!!

Thanks,

Parul

Hi, ad the deadline has arrived, and you are now deciding, please can you give me any feedback on the logo I submitted, with regard to any last min changes you wish to make,.
Look forward to your response and also the results.
Kind regards
Adam

Hello,

Based on your update, you are deciding on finalist submissions. My design did not get eliminated, so I'm assuming my design is in final decision process. Any feedback for improvement would be greatly appreciated.

Thank you,
Paige Kwon