Hi there. Could you kindly give me some feedback on my submission: Design id: 1409756
Looking forward to your reply. Thanks.

Hi Bhavesh,
Thanks very much for the designs! We like the style that you have used and the sans seriff font works very nicely. Perhaps the camera design is a bit too cluttered- we actually prefer the first version but I''m not sure it''s quite clear enough. I''m not sure how you would make it clearer though- sorry!
We also like the camera worked around the words ''book films'' but it again feels a little too cluttered.
I hope that helps and many thanks for the submissions.
James