hello, i tried my hand at your logo, could i get some feedback when you get a chance? thank you so much.

Hi,
I have send some of my creative work for you to choose.
Hope I can have some feedback from you when you are free to view my creative work.

Regards,

Your designs have too much lettering on it and not enough symbolism. If you can reduce the lettering and make a symbol more the focus point we may have something.

I like the logo but it remind me of a paint shop cause of the splash. If you can change it up a bit then we can reconsider.

feedback please.