Can i have feedback on my proposal

Thanks in Advance!
Neela

Hi,

I just submitted a first proposal for your logo, can you provide feedback on this ?

Thanks in advance for your advice, I'm at your disposition for any revision.

Kind regards,
Raoul

Hi Raoul Thanks for the design, we have sent you some feedback...

Hi creo - did you get our message regarding the second version of your design?

Hi Creo, Can you go back to your first design, including colours. The M,N,K & D should be more legible as per your latest design so we can have another look at the colours when they have the two tone and the K is more pronouced. The S is a lot better in the revised design. Look forward to the revision. Regards Paul