Can i have feedback on my proposal

Thanks in Advance!
Neela

Some feedback would be nice.

Hi there,

Thanks for inviting me. I have submitted design for your brief if you want any changes like colors, design and font feedback me.

Thanks,

MK

Hi, Can you please provide feedback on my submission.
thanks,
sajithgopalan.

The selected design is one of the overused concepts of logo designs.Doing some research online before selecting a design will help in selecting a unique mark.
http://www.gtgraphics.org/genericlogos.html