is the tagline required? its to long

No it's not. I currently use storytelling portraiture but the issue is that it's not legible. Thank you!

ok u updated the tagline good Thanx ......

Thanks for pointing that out. I appreciate it!

pleases give me a feedback

hi good day sir..
pls give me a feedback about my desing..

hoping for your reply..

thank you..

Hi i send you some sdesigns kindly give me quick feedback