i've submitted a design. pls give me a feedback.thank you!

we are hoping for a character with a face ? something that could be used for an advert later ?

Hi Did you already choose the logo
Are u still waiting for another logos

still waiting - have until the 4th

Please provide feedback on my Design #4618243

Regards,
Amri

Hi i have submitted a revised version. I have excluded the pie symbol. If you think there is a need for a font change or something else just let us know thanks.