design concept submitted. Please write back about the Submitted Design !

Hello, Thank you for your time an effort, here’s some feedback on the designs submitted: There’s a lot of artwork in the letters FMS, on the face of it, it does grab ones focus when seeing it for the first time. The artwork especially the curls in the letters is quite fancy however I’m not sure its appropriate for a food pop-up stall selling kebabs. It gives an impression that it’s quite upmarket; the brand does not warm up to people and is not in the same league of a ''meat-sold-on-skewers'' kind of shop. Just the logo -FMS- gives the impression that it’s a cake shop or a beauty shop selling luxury soaps, not sure if the artwork and style is fits in in this instance. The name - Fire Meats Stick - is a play on the word ''meats'' i.e., fire, meats and stick together means great food. That somehow is not being conveyed in the design. Overall its a clean design but not sure it hits the nail on the head. Hope that helps Thanks again, Rak

Hello,

i have submitted a design. can you please send feedback to let me know if it is close to what you are looking for.

Thank you.
Ivan