feedback plz ;)

Hi,

I just submitted a first proposal for your logo, can you provide feedback on this ?

Thanks in advance for your assessment, I'm at your disposition for any revision.

Kind regards,
Raoul

Hello,

I just submitted two proposal for your logo, for now, but i would like to know what you think about of my designs.

Thanks in advance for your atention,

Greetings,
Jonathan.