any feedback will be appreciated. Thanks.

I submitted a design, but I'm still trying to learn the trade, so I want to get as much feedback as possible! So if the design is way off from what you had in mind, please let me know and I'll work on another one, or if you have any ideas about the one I submitted. Thanks, I enjoyed working on the design.

Feedback on my design would be amazing, I really enjoyed visualising my idea, so would like to get it right, thanks!

Following your revised design brief, were there are submissions of mine you particularly liked/disliked? Just so I could try and revise them according to the new information you've given? Thanks!