Thank you for your submission. I have provided a feedback in as much detail as I could. 

You had a strong concept. I liked the use of the construction lines; my only concern was that the logo might look alright when printed on a business card but on a smaller area, instead of making a strong, iconic statement, it might appear to be a little congested. The composition could be improved if it was simplified. 

But having said that, I appreciate that you dared to be different. I would like to see more options from you. 

Thank you

A winner has been selected; Congratulations "Design From Scratch". Good job. 

Thank you all for your participation and efforts. I wish you all a very best of luck for the future

Kind Regards