only one day left..please attach the brief and extend the project

please review my design and let me know if there are any improvements needed

This site will be the home for subscribing to my personal biography (a series of chapters) and not for others to submit their stories. It will need a "Subscribe" button. The byline is "When Your Government Thinks You Are Special" It can have a "Contact Me" form. A "darker" and "mysterious" look is great.

please review my updated design as per your comments and let me know if there are any improvements needed