feedback me on design #36447030 , regards

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Design Id #36452234 Feedback Plz

Hi There,
I’ve just submitted a design for your project (ID:#36452944).
It would mean a lot if you could take a look at the description, where I’ve shared the thoughts behind the concept.
I look forward to hearing your feedback!
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Best regards,
Ha.Connick