feedback me on design #35740159 , regards

Hello Owner, Looking forward your valuable feedback on submission #4100962. Thanks!

Hello!
I’ve submitted my concept (Entry #35746474) based on your design brief. I truly hope it aligns with your vision..
I’d be really grateful if you could take a moment to share your feedback — and if it feels close to what you're looking for, and rating my work would be truly appreciated.
Thank you so much for your time!

Apologies for the delayed submission, I've now uploaded redesign of your current logo for your review.
Design ID: #35778452
Revised Version: #35779596

Looking forward to your thoughts!