please provide your valuable feedback on my design. design no : #34929518 and #34929519 . . .

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Hi Sir please provide some feedback on my designs.
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Please review my design and let me know your thoughts.

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I like a number of the designs, but I am looking for a simple logo to go with my company name "The Brokerage" with what we do "Yacht Consultants" and to add the tag line if possible, "Our Journey Begins Now"

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please check my design, #34931884, #34931885, regards.