Please check my design #34138980 and please give me your valuable feedback. Thank you so much.

Please provide feedback on my design..

feedback please

Would like to get your views on my concept.

Hello.
I have submitted a couple of designs, which are just starting points. Could you please give me feedback so I can get you the design you want? The designs are editable, so feel free to message me to customize any part of the design.
Thank you

feedback please!