feedback me on design 33809397 and 33809398 , thanks

Hi Sir please provide some feedback on my designs.
Thanks.

Hello,
Please review my design and let me know your thoughts.

Best.

Hello,
I have submitted a new design.
Please check the (Design Id #33811779).
Thank you.

Looking forward to your valuable feedback, Thank you!

Dear Please Check my designs
https://www.designcrowd.com/design/33820500
https://www.designcrowd.com/design/33820501
Both are different Design, So check them Both..
I hope you like them
Thank you

dear sir, pls see my submission (#4080091), i hope you like these