Good mornig! i hope you like my design, can you send some feedback? it will help to improve my work, thanks!!!

Good Afternoon sir ....Please Check My Submissions (#4053934) (#4053934) and (#4053934) Please give feedback my designs

Dear Customer,
I have submitted my designs #4053934, and #4053934, I would really appreciate it if you could provide me feedback... Without feedback, can't find the right way.
Thank you