please sir check my design #30933158,, feedback please thank you,...

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Hi, Project Owner!

I have submitted my design #30935444 and I appreciate it if you can provide me feedback, please don't hesitate to ask if you need any changes.
Thank You.

Best regards,
Adeliow

i like the writing but i would like a logo with a hairdresser