feedback me on design 29875014 and 29875015 , thanks

These are the ones I keep coming back to. Love the colors and use of the existing icon so its consistent with other branding. Not sure if we can stack the wording, or have more interest in the font, or add waves??? Close, but not quite there. Thank you!!

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Can you provide feedback into my design i woul give revision. Thanks

let's check my revised design 29895229 and 29895230 , and feedback me on them , thanks