feedback please!

The brand should not be altered. It is and must remain a ‘bar’ - above the capital letters F and C and must be in addition to the text that says Bar FC Holdings LLC

I hope that makes sense:)

Hi,
Hope your feedback please (#29572011).
Thanks

The brand should not be altered. It is and must remain a ‘bar’ - above the capital letters F and C and must be in addition to the text that says Bar FC Holdings LLC

KINDLY CHECK MY INTERPRETATION OF YOUR LOGO (DESIGN NO - #29579738). ANY KIND OF FEEDBACK WILL BE APPRECIATED.

Feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thank You!

Hi, I didn't touch your existing brand and was hoping to get some feedback to what you don't like so adjustments can be made. Much appreciated.