please check my design #29571763 feedback please, Thank you

Hello sir
please check my revision design #29574315

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Please excuse me for not answering your messages personally. With all the wonderful submissions, I have had trouble keeping up. I appreciate all the creativity and effort you have taken. Two days are left for the submissions and then we have the near impossible task is selecting the top ones for further revue. Please be patient.

Hello Sir,
I hope you well if you don't like my designs so eliminate my designs.
don't give me 2 stars this is impact my profile.

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I am traveling for the next few days and cannot respond until next weekend. I am sorry about that and thank you all for your efforts.