1) If you are going to use mountains in your design, please try to use a version of the actual mountain landscape that is in the attached presentation. There is also a river at the bottom of the mountains that flows from middle right to bottom left that would be great to incorporate if possible.
2) Make sure to give "Hotel" as much prominence as "Leavenworth", and make sure that people would be able to see both from a distance. This sign will be on the side of the building and on a roadside sign.
3) Remember that I ultimately will need to use one of the approved "Bavarian-style" fonts, so designs that focus too much on an alternate font style won't work.

Dear Honorable Sir,

Possible feedback on my design #29373767 would be much-appreciated .

Thank you.

thanks for the feedback,please give feedback on my designs.

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What happen to the Creative Brief for this project. Using Bavarian Font, Using the mountain range provided to emulate?

This completely unfair. Being sent on a wild goose chase with misdirection only to lose to a design that is nothing relate to the brief nor the updates.