Sir, please check my design #29287067 and feedback, please. Thank you.

kindly feedback me on my submitted design #29288518 and #29288519 , thanks

Re: #29302683
Initial draft and possible colours submitted. Please review and provide suggestions to get more detailed proof.
Would you be interested to see in a more "weathered" version? Different colours? Different font?
Thanks in advance for any positive input.

Re: #29302683
Initial draft and possible colours submitted. Please review and provide suggestions to get more detailed proof.
Would you be interested to see in a more "weathered" version? Different colours? Different font?
Thanks in advance for any positive input.