please check my submission #29229033 and feedback please thank you ..

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Please check my design #29232102 and let me know; if you need more changes, please advise me, and don't hesitate to ask for a revision.
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Hi,
I look forward to your feedback on design (#29238744).
I hope you like it. If not, please simply eliminate it without rating it as a low rating adversely affects my profile.
Thank you.
Nancy