feedback me on design #29225399 and #29225400 , thanks

Please check my design #29226085 and let me know; if you need more changes, please advise me, and don't hesitate to ask for a revision.
Thanks!

KINDLY CHECK MY INTERPRETATION OF YOUR LOGO (DESIGN NO - #29226293). ANY KIND OF FEEDBACK WILL BE APPRECIATED.

Please provide feedback, thanks.

Dear Honorable Sir,

Possible feedback on my design #29262301 would be much-appreciated .

Thank you.

please check my new design

feedback please!