feedback me on design #29057299 and #29057300 , thanks

Please provide feedback on my design..

Hi, Project Owner!

I have submitted my design #29093100 and I appreciate it if you can provide me feedback, please don't hesitate to ask if you need any changes.
Thank You.

Best regards,
Adeliow

Hi Everyone,
I am expecting something more contemporary and maybe I have not been able to come clear.
I have updated the brief, and also share 2 AIM logo idea with my sketch we could concemptualise and work on it in Gold and Black

I have also uploaded the Building where we have taken the first floor, and also the logo can be put in the glass area marked, I have sketched idea, showing Lifecare with AIM Logo on the top, and Specialist Clinic mentioned below .. .possibly a heart of heartbeat icon could be considered if it doesnt overdo it

I hope this will lead to better inputs

thanking you all for your efforts!!

please check #29123658 / #29123659 / #29123660