feedback please on design #28920266 and #28920267 , thanks

Good morning everyone! Please revisit the brief as there are new images and information .

please check my new concept design #28921070 and #28921071 , and feedback me about them , regards

A step in the right direction Rixy. Can you soften the clouds and have them look more like the sky and less like the leaf is smoking.
Please and thank you.

thanks a lot :)
let's check my revised design #28921464 and feedback me on that , its public place here :)

hello sir, I hope you like my design, #28928472 please give feedback, thank you very much