please check my design #28859454 feedback please, Thank you

hi sir please check my design (#28859543),, feedback please i will wait for your feedback thank you

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provide feedback to this designs ( #28860405, #28860406, #28860408, #28860409, #28860410 )
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( #28860405, #28860406, #28860408, #28860409, #28860410 )
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