feedback please on design #28804521 and #28804522 . regards

please Don't giver lower rating to any design if you dont like you can eliminate without lower rating if you have done Please remove
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#28798343

Hello there! Catch my design, please - #28821945. Be thankful for feedback. Maybe need some cha-cha-cha with font colors and etc))

I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks.!

I have removed any rating levels per your request.

Thank you..