Sir please check my design #28442136 and feedback please. Thank you.

Hello,
Please review my design and let me know your thoughts.

Best.

feedback please on my submission design #28444328 thanks

feedback please on my submission design

I want to thank everyone for their design submissions. I will be reaching out to some of you about revisions, including those of you who have asked. Sorry for the delayed response but with so much on my plate this has been on the back burner. Now that I have some free time you will hear back soon though. I added a second place and will possibly do a third place. I really appreciate your help with this overwhelming project.