hello please check my design #28436534. Your feedback would be helpful to me.

Dear Honorable Sir,

Have a great day.

possible feedback on my design #28455281 would be much-appreciated .

I hope you'll love my concept.

Please don't be hesitate to ask for revision if you need any changes.

Regards.

(In case if you don't like my concept, Just let me know I'll go with a different approach)