Sir, please check my design #28402832 and feedback, please. Thank you.

hello sir,
please check my design, #28403314, #28403315, #28403316.
thanks and regards.

hi, please check my designs and give the feedback for me.
my subs:


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i hope you like it, thank you :)

Looking forward to your valuable feedback, Thank you!

Looking forward to your valuable feedback, Thank you!

#28408290 check and give your feedback. Let me know if you need any change

I saw, you give me 5stars. Can I know if there a way to get yes by revising my design for you?
Give me a cool message and I can do better design for next time. #28404729
Thank you.

Dear Honorable Sir,

Have a great day.

possible feedback on my design #28436126 would be much-appreciated .

I hope you'll love my concept.

Please don't be hesitate to ask for revision if you need any changes.
Looking forward to your valuable feedback.

Regards.

(In case if you don't like my concept, Just let me know I'll go with a different approach)

Feedback pls