Thank you for you feedback, I am going to make the changes you recommended...

Thank you for your feedback, I uploaded the design with the changes you recommended, let me know what do you think about it and if it needs more changes...

regards:
Arthur

Thank you for your feedback, i sumitted two designs with the changes you recommended, let me know if they are to your liking, and if they need any more changes...
regargds,
Arthur

can i request some feedback on my design, thanks heaps:)