hello sir,
please check my design, #27999448, #27999449.
thanks and regards.

Would like to get your views on my concept.

I do like your especially the font. I an not sure about the bonnet. I cant really tell its a bonnet. Can you make the horse brown or black? The one I really like so far is yudaharv

Thank you very much for your feedback.
A new revision is submitted.
Will wait for your further response.
Have a great day ahead.