Please provide feedback on my design..

From this first round, my feedback is that I have the font. If you are just typing the words and putting a box or circle around it- I could easily do that! I also see a few that don't use the font I provided- That is a definite NO. The font is REQUIRED.
Please show some design skill or creativity and remember CLEAN, MODERN BOOKKEEPER.

Hi

Happy new year and hope you are having a good day.
I uploaded a new design with the theme of Penny Lane lyrics and as well as an idea behind book keeping.
Please do check the submission (#27907448) and share your feedbacks with me.
If you have any suggestions, or wish to make any changes, then comment that also.

Thank You
Arun
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