Sir, please check my design #27863314 and feedback, please.

Hello,
Possible feedback on my design would be much appreciated.
Thanks.

Hello,

I hope you are doing fine.

I've submitted my design concept for your project (#27865218)
Kindly have a look at it and share your feedback. I'm open to any suggestions from you :)
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Thanks in advance.
Regards
Akrash Ahmed

Check my concept #27868331 and message the changes required.

please check my new design

my first logo is like this, but you don't like it, and you have rejected my design like this.