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Hi Dear Customer
Could you please let me know what have I done wrong with my design? I mean actually I could not figure out what type of design you are looking for. I want to improve or make a better design with your requierements. Low star ratings badly affect designers ranking so I want to make sure that my next design could be better. Also you could upload some inspiration to the brief section if you are interested in. Thanks in advance!