please check my new design

Dear sir,
possible feedback on my design #27709894 would be much-appreciated .
Regards.

Hello! Please check my design and please send me some comments / feedback / suggestions.
https://www.designcrowd.com/design/27712069

Please help me to build your perfect Brand logo. I am waiting for your reply. Thanks
https://www.designcrowd.com/design/27712098