Sir, please check my designs #27568273, #27568274 and feedback, please.

I updated the design brief to provide more guidance. We are moving away from using the previous logo. It was perceived as too playful in a more professional industry.

I really loved what you did! Great refresh. But, we are going to go more modern on the look.

Hi! Please check my design and please send me some comments / feedback / suggestions.
https://www.designcrowd.com/design/27593849
https://www.designcrowd.com/design/27593884
Please help me to build your perfect Brand logo. I am waiting for your reply. Thanks