I have submitted a design. Please give your feedback for the design because it will help my future work. Thanks!

Feedback please! (design #27518402)

Sir
I submitted my design and hope you like it and give me 4/5 star ratting but If you don’t like my entries kindly left me without star instant of low star(1/2/3).
Because I spend a lot of time for your design.

INDEED

THANK YOU

THANK YOU