Please provide me feedback on my design.

Hello dear Contest Holder. Just to wish you the best of luck to your contest and let you know that I'm at your service for any input as so far. Kindest regards, artespraticas

Would like to get your feedback on my concept.

Dear Contest Holder, if there’s anything else I can do with any of my entries just let me know. All the best to your contest and always at your service, artespraticas

Dear Designers!
Please read our updated brief: we are looking for a strong, aggressive, masculine logo. We are manufactures, our labels are printed black only that's why we like negative space. We will put our labels on belts, tactical gear, so we prefer 1:1 ratio fit. The logo has to express that we are in the tactical MIL/LE business, our brand name DARK, you may include elements related to sewing. We like the sci-fi world, but our new logo shouldn't be mixed up with the e-sports team logo.
We would like to use our new logo beside the labels on clothing like caps, t-shirts, keychains. The logo must be laser engraving ready.
We don't want to see an iteration of the most common 'tactical' logos and we would like to avoid common elements like skulls, crosshairs, spartan helmets, guns, bullets, knives etc.. and please no mascots or irrelevant elements.
I'm sure, you will dig up google and check out ours websites don't stick to our concept, we don't insist to force the DT letters in a logo or use our old gear style logo.