please check my submission #27359742 and feedback please, thank you

hello sir, please provide feedback on my design #27370185 ...

If you don't like my design, please eliminate it rather than giving 1/2/3 star rating.

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Please have a look on design #27396610 & #27396611...

Hello, introduce, I'm AFstd, I'm very enthusiastic about participating in your design contest, I try to give the best for you even though it's not perfect, if you like, please leave feedback for my design
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