please check my design #27163468,, feedback please

For anybody reading this, we're more after asymmetrical designs.

Hi everybody,

We would like to try out something different. We want to try out incorporating the "Footy Futbol" part more into the "crest abstract" shape, using Bebas Neue as the typeface or similar. Here's an overly simplified version of this concept.

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I cannot believe we cannot post a reference image here. What kind of joke is this.

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